Topic on Talk:Stephens Lightner

Proposing a new member to the Lightner Registry: Stephens Irlwin

Stephens Irlwin was an Australian children's TV star primarily known for their work teaching kids about Australian wildlife, whose show ran for 1-7. They bat with an Animal Control Pole, though sometimes they will try to bat with the rope loop which leads to more strikes than would usually be thrown against them. When not playing Blaseball they run the Australian zloo and live with their husband, 4 kids, and 1 unusually large and scaly dog. Do not let Stephens Irlwin near Lowe Forbes as it has been their life goal to capture Forbes and they will chase them until Lowe is comfortably out of reach, they have never tried to capture Brock Forbes the reason is unknown but many have theorized it is because Irlwin doesn't know that Brock's last name is Forbes.

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1-7 what? Hours, series, or supposed to be ambiguous? Fine if so, but the word "whose" makes it easier to parse as part of the sentence instead of "their".

The last sentence is long and would scan better as two sentences. Can you re-word it as well to meet the Style Guide voice (4.1) that the rest of the entry has?

More Stephens Lightner should play blaseball and I'm glad this one does!

1-7 is supposed to be ambiguous yes, and I agree that would scan better as two sentences. I'll also try my best to update it to fit the style guide

How is this? Do not let Stephens Irlwin near Lowe Forbes as for unknown reasons Stephens Irlwin's life goal has been to capture a Forbes and they will peruse Lowe until they have evaded Irlwin. They have never tried to capture Brock Forbes, the reason is unknown but many have theorized it is because Irlwin doesn't know that Brock's last name is Forbes.