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Latest revision as of 20:33, 30 November 2020

Historical Jessica Telephones & the IRM

With the IRM now established as backstories for specific incarnations of JT, I thought it would be useful to consolidate iterations of the Eternal Jessica mentioned on the main article into a list for easier reference, and provide a space to theory-craft backstories for additional JTs, so people can work collaboratively on adding them to the IRM. At present, the article mentions:

Spartan Warrior Jessica Telephone (480 BCE)
Jessica Persephone (580s? BCE)
Ancient Rome Jessica Telephone (80s? BCE)
Viking Jessica (980s CE)
English Restoration Era Jessica Telephone (1680s CE)
'Classic' Jessica Telephone (1980s CE)
'Pie High' Jessica Telephone (2080s CE)
Lasers & 4-D Holograms Jessica Telephone (2380s CE)

It might be useful to state which iterations people have an interest in working on backstories for, so people don't work at cross purposes on the similar eras of JT. Likewise it would probably be best to also to submit the finished IRM blurbs onto this talk page for feedback/sensitivity reading, and also to discuss which historical eras should probably not be elaborated on further-- especially those that lend themselves to potentially problematic historical depictions-- i.e., it may be best to avoid "Viking Jessica Telephone" or "Ancient Roman Jessica Telephone" entirely. It would also be great if we could expand the scope of JTs away from their overwhelming focus on European history, but that naturally comes with its own pitfalls, and should IMO be handled with extra care. Kerascene (talk) 01:54, 30 September 2020 (UTC)

Kerascene (talk) 17:35, 29 September 2020 (UTC)

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Thanks for compiling these! As a classical archaelogist, I would be willing to tackle the Roman JT entry in order to avoid problematic content. I'm thinking a Catullus-esque (minus the invectives) "poeta nova" who writes elegies to her paramour. I also think a post-apocalyptic 3480s Fury Road or Tank Girl style JT could be neat. Cassiterine (talk) 12:04, 30 September 2020 (UTC)

YES to both! Tank Girl/Furiosa JT sounds FANTASTIC. Likewise, my field is 17th/18th century history so I would love to work on 1680s JT. I'd also be interested in writing the Jessica Persephone entry, but that should definitely have input from Tigers fans since it's the period of Jessica Telephone most closely associated with her time on their team. Kerascene (talk) 12:35, 30 September 2020 (UTC)

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So who is working on Classical Jessica, like the version without all the dirtbag stuff? Is there a concentrated effort anywhere, how does one become part of it? Also I have no idea how to add a timestamped signature to this DyoGenesis (talk) 19:07, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

I volunteered to write it, but I'd like to get input from the Tigers beforehand. Kerascene (talk) 20:40, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

You can read all the basics about how to use Talk pages at Editing 101/Talk Pages, but the quick answer for signatures is four tildes. BlaseballSteve || Admin, Founder || Steven_#3235 (talk) 16:25, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

Word Flow

Some of the writing on this page doesn't fit with the style of the wiki/does not flow well. I am asking permission to change some of the word choice to better fit the style guide. No actual content, however, will be changed. I can post the changes I was hoping to make here first if that would help? (extremelygoodandcool, 10/26/2020)

If it is the change that was just attempted on the test wiki, no you may not change it. It reads to us as an attempt at a characterization change. We can revisit it after the siesta and wiki changeover. Nesblitt || Admin || nesbitt#1991 (talk) 17:50, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Jessica Telephone and Pitching Machine

Since joining the Macchiato City for the inaugural Coffee Cup, Jessica Telephone and fellow Macchiato City player Pitching Machine have struck up an unlikely friendship, bonding over their mutual experience in being shelled, their similar music tastes, coffee (Macchiatos, obviously, and various other things.

GoinUSPS (talk) 01:48, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

Would recommend cross-posting this to Pitching Machine's page as well to get some eyes on it. Nesblitt || Admin || nesbitt#1991 (talk) 02:14, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

Thank you, would I just copy and paste this over there?

GoinUSPS (talk) 23:30, 20 November 2020 (UTC)

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-After reviewing the edit history, I am removing the flat earth joke. It was a drive-by edit not made by someone who collaborated with the Pies discord community and shouldn't be on here. [[User:Nesblitt|Nesblitt]] ([[User talk:Nesblitt|talk]]) 19:15, 28 September 2020 (UTC)
+__FORCETOC__
-== Tone and Content ==
+== Archive ==
-Not to be that guy, but can we talk about editing pretty much everything under "Peanut Shells and Rap God?"
+Hey folks, since this page gets a lot of traffic, I'm going to start archiving older discussions to keep things tidy. I intend to put closed discussions into a new archive page every week, at the start of the season. I intend to keep the "Historical Jessica Telephones & the IRM" section on this page in general as a quick reference. [[User:BlaseballSteve|BlaseballSteve &#124;&#124; Admin, Founder &#124;&#124; Steven_#3235]] ([[User talk:BlaseballSteve|talk]]) 14:56, 7 October 2020 (UTC)
-On the shallower end, it doesn't fit with the tone/flow of the wiki. It's very prosaic and sounds more like fanfiction than the 'faux Wikipedia' aesthetic of everything else. Fanfiction is cool, but there's a style guide for a reason. Also, none of her previous characterization/content slots in with the goofy vape skateboard meme thing? It's funny, but it's out of the blue and doesn't match the rest of the page. Can we add that stuff to any of the 20 other players who have vape bro energy? Or even to players who don't have a lot of personality already?
+[[Talk:Jessica Telephone/Archive S8/Archive]] - This covers conversation up to the start of Season 9. Includes: Flat earth drive-by post; Dirtbag Jessica Discussion
-The main thing that bothered me though is the similarly out of the blue dirtbag thing. Nothing so far would suggest that she's awful to her partners/women in general, so it seems incongruous with everything else. More importantly, there's a persistent and harmful stereotype in media characterizing trans lesbians as abusers/dirtbags/sleezy, and this seems like it's leaning very far in that direction. Not that trans lesbians can't be flawed characters of course, but in that ''particular'' way it falls into the same camp as having a black father be a deadbeat dad or having a Jewish character's fatal flaw be greed. In a vacuum it's okay, but altogether the implication isn't. Good.
+[[Talk:Jessica Telephone/Archive S9 to S11/Archive]] - This covers conversation from Season 9 to Season 11.
-I don't want to say that it's intentionally malicious, but I think that it's close enough to a damaging caricature that I uh. Would not want to touch that area. So while of course I'm not the King Of The Wiki (I made an account just for this post, actually) as a trans lesbian I'd like to beg you folks to rework this. (from Quickfix00)
+== Historical Jessica Telephones & the IRM ==
-:Thanks for starting the conversation, this is a good opening. Just a small thing, please sign off your posts with four tildes (<nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>) which will post your username for easy identification. You can indent messages with colons, one for each indent you wish to make. [[User:BlaseballSteve|BlaseballSteve &#124;&#124; Admin, Founder &#124;&#124; Steven_#3235]] ([[User talk:BlaseballSteve|talk]]) 16:44, 29 September 2020 (UTC)
+With the IRM now established as backstories for specific incarnations of JT, I thought it would be useful to consolidate iterations of the Eternal Jessica mentioned on the main article into a list for easier reference, and provide a space to theory-craft backstories for additional JTs, so people can work collaboratively on adding them to the IRM. At present, the article mentions:
+* Spartan Warrior Jessica Telephone (480 BCE)
+* Jessica Persephone (580s? BCE)
+* Ancient Rome Jessica Telephone (80s? BCE)
+* Viking Jessica (980s CE)
+* English Restoration Era Jessica Telephone (1680s CE)
+* 'Classic' Jessica Telephone (1980s CE)
+* 'Pie High' Jessica Telephone (2080s CE)
+* Lasers & 4-D Holograms Jessica Telephone (2380s CE)
+It might be useful to state which iterations people have an interest in working on backstories for, so people don't work at cross purposes on the similar eras of JT. Likewise it would probably be best to also to submit the finished IRM blurbs onto this talk page for feedback/sensitivity reading, and also to discuss which historical eras should probably not be elaborated on further-- especially those that lend themselves to potentially problematic historical depictions-- i.e., it may be best to avoid "Viking Jessica Telephone" or "Ancient Roman Jessica Telephone" entirely. It would also be great if we could expand the scope of JTs away from their overwhelming focus on European history, but that naturally comes with its own pitfalls, and should IMO be handled with extra care. [[User:Kerascene|Kerascene]] ([[User talk:Kerascene|talk]]) 01:54, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
+[[User:Kerascene|Kerascene]] ([[User talk:Kerascene|talk]]) 17:35, 29 September 2020 (UTC)
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-:So the thing that is not necessarily clear here is that the "dirtbag" conception of JT is not in the abuser/sleazy/deadbeat way. "Dirtbag JT" as conceived is specifically a dirtbag teen. She wore a tuxedo t-shirt and JNCO jeans to Hlomecoming. She dropped two No-Doz into a can of jolt and calls it SKATE JUICE. She's into Eminem and Mindless Self Indulgence. She vapes and skateboards wherever she's not allowed to, and she stays up til 4 AM breaking glass bottles against the side of a barn. Maybe we could stand to make this vision of Jess a bit clearer in this section, but this is something that we [the Philly Pies segment of the official Blaseball discord, who incidentally came up with the conception of JT as a time-travelling poly trans lesbian in the first place] have been workshopping for several weeks now and feel very strongly about. Something we have been considering, but haven't quite nailed down yet, is potentially adding a section to JT's page that provides details about her different 80s decade iterations. Dirtbag JT is (tentatively) the 2080s iteration. Maybe you feel more connected to her 1980s iteration. That said - we also want to avoid making an infinitely expanding list of different JT iterations that anyone can fill in with whatever, because they're not actually alternate versions. We feel very strongly that these are all the same person, but at different points in her life. Anyway, I hope this helps you understand where we're coming from, and I strongly encourage you to come to the discord and collaborate with us! We're very friendly and love welcoming in new people (and we have quite a few trans lesbians FWIW, myself included). Like you, we are not the Kings of the Wiki, and we are very invested in coming up with a solution to this that makes everybody happy. --Hayley [[User:Kpaxxxxx|Kpaxxxxx]] ([[User talk:Kpaxxxxx|talk]]) 16:53, 29 September 2020 (UTC)
+Thanks for compiling these! As a classical archaelogist, I would be willing to tackle the Roman JT entry in order to avoid problematic content. I'm thinking a Catullus-esque (minus the invectives) "poeta nova" who writes elegies to her paramour. I also think a post-apocalyptic 3480s Fury Road or Tank Girl style JT could be neat. [[User:Cassiterine|Cassiterine]] ([[User talk:Cassiterine|talk]]) 12:04, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
+:: YES to both! Tank Girl/Furiosa JT sounds FANTASTIC. Likewise, my field is 17th/18th century history so I would love to work on 1680s JT. I'd also be interested in writing the Jessica Persephone entry, but that should definitely have input from Tigers fans since it's the period of Jessica Telephone most closely associated with her time on their team. [[User:Kerascene|Kerascene]] ([[User talk:Kerascene|talk]]) 12:35, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
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-:Aha! Yeah, I definitely do understand where you're coming from now, I didn't get it from just reading the wiki. I will totally go talk to you folks on the discord, and now that I understand your ideas/changes I do really like them. I just want them to be less confusing if they're also confusing people other than me lmao. Thank you for taking the time to explain! [[User:Quickfix00|Quickfix00]] ([[User talk:Quickfix00|talk]]) 17:23, 29 September 2020 (UTC)
+So who is working on Classical Jessica, like the version without all the dirtbag stuff? Is there a concentrated effort anywhere, how does one become part of it? Also I have no idea how to add a timestamped signature to this [[User:DyoGenesis|DyoGenesis]] ([[User talk:DyoGenesis|talk]]) 19:07, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
+:I volunteered to write it, but I'd like to get input from the Tigers beforehand. [[User:Kerascene|Kerascene]] ([[User talk:Kerascene|talk]]) 20:40, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
+:You can read all the basics about how to use Talk pages at [[Help:Editing 101/Talk Pages|Editing 101/Talk Pages]], but the quick answer for signatures is four tildes. [[User:BlaseballSteve|BlaseballSteve &#124;&#124; Admin, Founder &#124;&#124; Steven_#3235]] ([[User talk:BlaseballSteve|talk]]) 16:25, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
+== Word Flow ==
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+Some of the writing on this page doesn't fit with the style of the wiki/does not flow well. I am asking permission to change some of the word choice to better fit the style guide. No actual content, however, will be changed. I can post the changes I was hoping to make here first if that would help?
+(extremelygoodandcool, 10/26/2020)
+:If it is the change that was just attempted on the test wiki, no you may not change it. It reads to us as an attempt at a characterization change. We can revisit it after the siesta and wiki changeover. [[User:Nesblitt|Nesblitt || Admin || nesbitt#1991]] ([[User talk:Nesblitt|talk]]) 17:50, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
+== Jessica Telephone and Pitching Machine ==
-:The problem I see is that what you describe and how that particular section is written are not the same thing. 'Dirtbag' is not being used for code as 'haha look at what a goofy skater kid teenaged jerk she was', it's being used as 'ah, look at the inherent scumminess of JT as she always was and has been, now on full display'. To the extent that she is actively causing problems which her relationships by being that way and then actively refusing to change or improve. At the very least the wording is not well phrased.
+Since joining the Macchiato City for the inaugural Coffee Cup, Jessica Telephone and fellow Macchiato City player Pitching Machine have struck up an unlikely friendship, bonding over their mutual experience in being shelled, their similar music tastes, coffee (Macchiatos, obviously, and various other things.
-:I don't think that saying it's just a different iteration/different era of the character really cuts it with the page as it stands and with how it's written is a pretty sharp veer from what had already been established. Why is it necessary and essential to include? Why is it something that is felt strongly about? Even if it's 'lore you came up with in the first place' it's now established and ingrained and this subsequently damages the consistency and perception of the character. What is wrong with JT just being the cool older sister to the league and time travelling lesbian which most everyone seems to love as an interpretation?
+[[User:GoinUSPS|GoinUSPS]] ([[User talk:GoinUSPS|talk]]) 01:48, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
-[[User:Izzyclu|Izzyclu]] ([[User talk:Izzyclu|talk]]) 17:26, 29 September 2020 (UTC)
+:Would recommend cross-posting this to Pitching Machine's page as well to get some eyes on it. [[User:Nesblitt|Nesblitt || Admin || nesbitt#1991]] ([[User talk:Nesblitt|talk]]) 02:14, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
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+::Thank you, would I just copy and paste this over there?
-:Either relegate 'Dirtbag' Jess to an IRM or remove it entirely. It's clearly contentious material that members of the community have repeatedly found uncomfortable, and incongruous with how the character is popularly perceived. [[User:Kerascene|Kerascene]] ([[User talk:Kerascene|talk]]) 17:35, 29 September 2020 (UTC)
+::[[User:GoinUSPS|GoinUSPS]] ([[User talk:GoinUSPS|talk]]) 23:30, 20 November 2020 (UTC)