Topic on Talk:Rey Wooten

Proposals- Change to "Wooten took on their most formidable bounty: Oscar Dollie, wanted dead or alive." ("Oscar Dollie" linked to its player page, obv) It feels more natural to use in a dramatic sentence like that rather than a semicolon. It also feels like there's potential for a bit of expansion or speculation on *why* Rey decided to let it go, even if the answer ends up being "Wooten captured Dollie, but for unknown reasons decided to set it free". Or keeping it as is but adding "To this day, Dollie is the only creature she ever let go. If approached about the reasons behind this exception, both players decline to comment."

The "three things" sentence is good... Do you think it would work any better if it was the opening sentence? It's a solid attention-grabber and could provide some early context as to why they're called "Ruthless".

The sun sniping from s24 should definitely be specified, at least ("season 24, day 29, when she"). Linking the game from Before sounds like it would be helpful but is there a precedent for doing that? I know it's not, like, illegal, but it feels like a grey area. I haven't seen Before links in any other articles so I'm not sure if it's... allowed? Frowned upon?? Discouraged??

The tone for the "history" part feels fine since it's mostly about characterization rn but the Batting portion feels like it should (regretably) be drier/less biased. "Her greatest moment" could arguably be any moment and if we aren't including any further context about the game then "sniping" the Sun is too vague. It would be easier for readers who aren't familiar with that event/might not be able to access the game on Before to specify "In season 24 [link], day 29, she scored a 12-run home-run which resulted in the Nullification of the Maximum Sun[link] Modification. Notably, this was the first instance of a Sun being nullified by the Black Hole (Black Hole)[link]." If readers can't look at that and go "woah what thats such a badass moment" then thats on them /lh