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we really like the change to enraptured! Some suggestions were maybe: - “giddy” to “enraptured” is good — maybe “Newly unbound Patchwork was giddy to throw…” would be “Patchwork’s newly broadened horizons enraptured them, and they threw… [continues as is]” or similar - “sever” to something like “widen”? — something emphasizing that the connection still exists, but now allows fairwood to connect to the crabitat/olde one/baltimore *as well* and not *instead* - “leaving Patchwork untethered from anything but themselves” — maybe something more along the lines of “This left Patchwork with an unfamiliar, yet intriguing, need/desire to explore their new boundaries — or lack thereof.” hope this is helpful 👍
