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Oh yeah for sure we can work on that - The idea was less about being severed from their home, and more being in a state where the one thing her identity was tethered too was cut off, letting her take it in even wilder directions (think like the feeling of when you first move out - suddenly you can eat whatever you want whenever)

I think part of the original pitch for it also had to do with her being caught up in the many versions of the players on the Garages - since the way she experienced time meant she had overlapping ideas of who people were, so part of the emphasis there is also being in a new place with new people. who she had no prior experience or expectations with.

That being said - yes lets take a look! What passages in specific were you looking at?

For the use of "giddy" we can probably swap out something like "enraptured" that might capture the energy better?