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oh yes that's super helpful! how does this read for the edits: | oh yes that's super helpful! how does this read for the edits: | ||
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| − | In season 22 Patchwork was traded to the Baltimore Crabs, and immediately felt a pang of being separated from the Pine Woods in both a literal and spiritual sense. In flight from Seattle Patchwork felt their heart grow more and more strained, until they finally entered Baltimore as a Crab, and the Olde One called out to them. She offered to evolve the connection between Patchwork and the Pine Woods that they felt themselves being tugged away from. Patchwork agreed, and when they stepped foot in Baltimore, something was different. Local carcinization expert Pedro Davids was the one who pinpointed exactly what had happened, confirmed by checking for Patchwork’s now non-existent pulse. Davids explained that crabs were biologically interesting in that they possessed an open circulatory system, which meant that the Olde One had simply carcinized Patchwork’s heart into not existing, leaving Patchwork with an unfamiliar, yet intriguing, need/desire to explore their new boundaries — or lack thereof | + | In season 22 Patchwork was traded to the Baltimore Crabs, and immediately felt a pang of being separated from the Pine Woods in both a literal and spiritual sense. In flight from Seattle Patchwork felt their heart grow more and more strained, until they finally entered Baltimore as a Crab, and the Olde One called out to them. She offered to evolve the connection between Patchwork and the Pine Woods that they felt themselves being tugged away from. Patchwork agreed, and when they stepped foot in Baltimore, something was different. Local carcinization expert Pedro Davids was the one who pinpointed exactly what had happened, confirmed by checking for Patchwork’s now non-existent pulse. Davids explained that crabs were biologically interesting in that they possessed an open circulatory system, which meant that the Olde One had simply carcinized Patchwork’s heart into not existing, leaving Patchwork with an unfamiliar, yet intriguing, need/desire to explore their new boundaries — or lack thereof |
Patchwork’s newly broadened horizons enraptured them, and they threw themselves into experimentation with what exactly they were now. | Patchwork’s newly broadened horizons enraptured them, and they threw themselves into experimentation with what exactly they were now. | ||
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I went for "evolve" on the descriptor to the carcinization change as a way to carry on the themes on the carcinization side, and to make it more of a "the bond is still then but it's changing" thing. | I went for "evolve" on the descriptor to the carcinization change as a way to carry on the themes on the carcinization side, and to make it more of a "the bond is still then but it's changing" thing. | ||
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Let me know what you guys think! | Let me know what you guys think! | ||
