Topic on Talk:Evelton McBlase II

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Here's a proposed re-write:
 
Here's a proposed re-write:
  
After being revoked, McBlase joined the Core Mechanics. The team was initially "quietly hoping that they would leave,"  but have since taken a liking to their unorthodox inventions. They have also been trying to rehabilitate McBlase, and have given them an extensive list of anti-capitalist literature. McBlase has allegedly fully embraced leftism, and has been seen trying to build a machine that they refer to as a "praxis."
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After being revoked, McBlase joined the Core Mechanics. The team was initially "quietly hoping that they would leave,"  but have since taken a liking to their unorthodox inventions, such as a "Death Ray" that helps clear out underbrush and prevent forest fires, a "Murder Trap" that provides transportation to previously inaccessible portions of the Core, and a Toaster (evil). They have also been trying to rehabilitate McBlase, and have given them an extensive list of anti-capitalist literature. McBlase has allegedly fully embraced leftism, and has been seen trying to build a machine that they refer to as a "praxis."
  
 
Is it ok if I put the other rumors up, since there's no discussion about them happening?
 
Is it ok if I put the other rumors up, since there's no discussion about them happening?
  
 
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