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New IRM: Chorby Short, the Sukebam Pseudacris maculata

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Cuttlefishman (talkcontribs)

New Chorby Short IRM proposal - is froggie IRM, like others, but has a bit more specific of a tone than some of the other froggie Chorbys

"Chorby J. Short is a Boreal Chorus frog (Pseudacris maculata) sukeban (delinquent school girl) who takes guff from no one. One snide remark from anyone about her height and she whacks them with her bat. Despite this abrasive and aggressive personality, her soul melts when she interacts with wildlife, like the Bison that populate Yellowstone National Park. She would move to the park following an extended delay in her application as it was lost in the shadows (somehow having been accidentally mailed to Seattle?) to participate in a work-study programme with the Yellowstone Magic, where she is learning to be a population ecologist.

Chorby's current participation as a star batter on the Magic is the result of her learning that Blaseball, and more specifically always swinging at everything that comes her way, ball, peanut, person, or otherwise is a healthy way to blow off her emotions at the end of a day. She hopes that at the end of her work-study at the park, she has a chance to continue playing blaseball while interacting with wildlife."

Any feedback given would be great - this said, I think this one works as a pretty short / succinct IRM, so really mostly looking for anything which would really flesh out and develop this Chorby.

Silvaria (talkcontribs)

I think that looks good! The explanation for how she got to Seattle first is just the right sort of comedic paper messup that gets me smiling to imagine about.

Mac (talkcontribs)

Huge fan of this. You might look to include some of the ways Chorby had been affected by blessings or other in game events? Otherwise looks good though.