Topic on Talk:Kelvin Drumsolo

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Just wanted to mention a couple of typos - should probably be 'married and divorced several times over, allegedly with the same person' (or smthn but because generally one says married to and divorced from'. You've used ze/zir throughout but wrote 'their (sometimes) spouse'. Under Absolute Hot, you've written 'if ze gave an impressive enough' so should probably add performance on there. Next sentence you've got an 'anf' instead of and. Other than that it looks good to me! Much more academic sounding!