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-I wrote a little blurb about Gwiffin's rivalry with Gabriel Griffith. I didn't want to make it too long, so I kept it short and loose so we can let the rivalry develop if it makes sense to.
+''I wrote a little blurb about Gwiffin's rivalry with Gabriel Griffith. I didn't want to make it too long, so I kept it short and loose so we can let the rivalry develop if it makes sense to.''
-''When Greer Gwiffin joined the Hawai’i Fridays, he formed a friendly rivalry with fellow birdman on the team, Gabriel Griffith. The two naturally had much in common, including finding mutual inspiration in each other to improve their performance in the splort. They would challenge each other on the mound and at the plate to bring their A-game to every game.''
+When Greer Gwiffin joined the Hawai’i Fridays, he formed a friendly rivalry with fellow birdman on the team, Gabriel Griffith. The two naturally had much in common, including finding mutual inspiration in each other to improve their performance in the splort. They would challenge each other on the mound and at the plate to bring their A-game to every game.
 When Greer lost bets with Griffith, he would be forced to interrupt his podcast with “a message from my teammate Gabe, who has requested that I say on air that eagles are the superior raptors, and much better than owls. Thanks, Gabe. And now back to our usual programming.”