Topic on Talk:Sovereign Nation of Hawai'i

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I've removed many of the problem points that I noticed. There still needs to be work done in the article, I still have a lot of issues with the page content, but this is I think a better start than the revision it was before. I'm not convinced we need to keep the Economy or Political Structure sections (and my current draft of the page I have, stored off-wiki, uses those sections for a cheap gag I don't think would actually fit on the wiki), but it does serve as nice padding to make it seem more fleshed out.