Topic on Talk:Theodore Cervantes

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 I'd like to remove the following sections. The details here have not been mentioned in Mills spaces in over a year, and are pretty strongly against current lore.
 Twitter Beefs
 Voice
 I'd like to substantially rewrite the following sections:
 Life Before Soul Swap – Changing this from a top-level header to a second-level header, and having the top-level header for this section be "Discipline Era".
 Life After Soul Swap – Renaming to reflect that this is just early Discipline Era lore. Replacing the stuff about Cerv's new pitching style with a reference to its cyborgization.
 Rumors – Removing the rumor saying that it wasn't cyborgized, adding a rumor that the pitching machine it swapped souls with was Pitching Machine. Adding other rumors relating to events from twitter/fanfiction that mesh well with the rest of Cerv's lore.
 I'd like to add a few more sections:
 After Domenic Marijuana's Incineration – The tone of the team changed quite a bit when Dom died, I'd like to briefly go into how Cerv handled that, as well as Day X 2.
 Coffee Cup – Cerv was team captain for the winning team, I'd like to discuss this a bit.
 Expansion Era – Several important things happened in Cerv's life in the Expansion Era I'd like to cover. Its had some emotional growth, it's fallen in love with and had a child with the Mills Fax Machine, and it's made friends with a number of Mills that weren't on the team in the Discipline Era.
 Art – I'm asking some artists for permission to use their art for the wiki, and I'm planning on uploading anything I can to the gallery. I'll also be replacing the main image, the main Mills HC for Cerv is that it's Black, and I'd like the main art to reflect that.