Topic on Talk:Sparks Beans

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I have to say, I definitely like this version of the page a lot more than what currently exists on there. I especially appreciate that Sparks being Vietnamese is elaborated on past a single mention on the page- while I was aware of them being Vietnamese, many people I talked to had no idea about it, so seeing that aspect of their character being elaborated on makes me really happy. I do have a few points to make, though:

First of all, ‘Sparks’ is listed as their nickname; do they have a given or chosen name other than that? If so, might be worth listing.

The pre-ILB section is better than it used to be, but might need to go through some revisions later on- I’m not exactly sure what’s making me feel this way right now, but I’ll get back to you if I figure out what’s pinging me about it.

I’m… pretty sure that the entire Incineration section violates wiki policy on incineration narratives full stop, though, and it’s why I thought about commenting on this talk page at all- if there were any changes that would be a priority to make, I’d probably talk about revising that entire section.