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Hi! So as it's been 24 hours I'm going to go ahead and put the page up, and I'm definitely going to take you up on some of these edits as they're good points to make. I didn't realize that the Garages jokes could be construed as hating on the Garages (they were made lovingly as someone who is a Garage and with the approval of some friends who are Garages) so I'm going to take out the bit about "hating the Garages music" altogether, and have clarified the part about the pitchers to show that it is a joke about Dark Seattle (the Corporates are often described in lore to have like, fifty players on their team due to how Synergy Blood is said to work) and not a joke at the expense of the Garages actual team.

I removed the link and reference referring to Tinder but I have decided not to remove the single link attached to the "Up North and A Little Bit West" part because I think it's important to have an explanation of the joke somewhere in the article so that an outside reader who isn't familiar with the lore could discover this part of the wiki on their own, and so that the article doesn't become self-referential.

I wanted to thank you for hearing me out on this and for being willing to accept a fun IRM entry like this one.