Topic on Talk:Jon Halifax

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Hey so we chatted a little to feel this out and we wanted to see how you felt about the following edits to the article:

*not hyperlink directly to Dark Seattle, so removing the link in the Tinder joke (maybe swap it for LinkedIn? technically you can't text in that but that's just part of the bit imo) and removing the link in the Trivia section, or just linking to regular Seattle

*remove the overt hating on the Garages since it might just be misconstrued as just the Crabs fans being mean to The Garages and we'd rather avoid that altogether (even if it's fine now, I suspect it would feel bad for some unsuspecting Garage to stumble on)

*soften and reword the bit about having lots of pitchers since that's also directly targeting the Garages (something like "more pitchers is better" since Jon is an awful pitcher so it's funny to make him be wrong about strategy, or a joke about him just complaining that the Crabs only have 4 pitchers, ignoring how fairly normal that makes our rotation these days)

*the sun thing is overshadowed by heliolatry and the fact that we killed the sun already so it's decentered enough to be a nod rather than a direct reference, so that's fine

*the armwarmers thing is like, he knits, so that actually fits fine as well

This way it keeps the nods to Dark Seattle in the IRM and avoids making direct links to some content that some folks aren't comfortable with.

Let me know what you think, and if that's something you would be willing to accommodate!