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Edit 1 will be to a phrasing error on the last parapgraph, where They look forward to the their new teammates and experiencing the epic highs and lows of professional Blaseball!" was meant to be. "They look forward to being with their new teammates and experiencing the epic highs and lows of professional Blaseball!" Whoops.
For the phrasing that Malgic pointed out, do you have an idea in particular on how to manage that? My writing juices are a little tapped out at the moment as may be obvious, so I'm wondering how best to shuffle those words around to lessen awkwardness.