Topic on Talk:Melton Telephone
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The flow of "Before joining the Magic, they spent their time tending to the Spring, often giving a stern lecture and occasional bonk on the noggin to any visitors who disrespected it by littering or otherwise harming the long-term integrity of the Spring. One day, Merlinmeyer misdialed a call for backup. Now Melton is a shy but enthusiastic rookie who loves prank calls" feels awkward. Maybe you could have that Melton is a shy but enthusiastic dryad who loves prank calls earlier in the entry and then have the sentence about Merlinmeyer misdailing be where it is, adding in something about Merlinmeyer recruiting Melton when they were the one to answer.
